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Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows

Rowling Is Bound To Disappoint Us

Updated Thursday, July 19, 2007, at 2:09 PM ET

Caution: This entire Book Club contains spoilers.

Illustration by Charlie Powell. Click image to expand.Dear Dan,

I agree with Stephen King: However Rowling ends the series, she's bound to disappoint. Once we read the last word the story will petrify, stiffening from a growing organism into something unchangeable. Or perhaps it will become like a photograph in the Wizarding world. The people in the magical pictures may wink and wave, but they can't ever do anything new.

In the penultimate tome, Dumbledore tells Harry, "Voldemort was, I believe, more attached to this school than he has ever been to a person. Hogwarts was where he had been happiest; the first and only place he had felt at home." Harry, Rowling writes, "felt slightly uncomfortable at these words, for this was exactly how he felt about Hogwarts too." The star-crossed enemies aren't alone. When I read C.S. Lewis' Chronicles of Narnia as an unhappy 11-year-old, I convinced myself that if I wished hard enough, I would step out of my dull and anxious life into a world of heroic adventures. I opened closet doors hoping to find Narnia the other side. For years I found it not just unfair, but a little surprising that I never did. I bet millions of Rowling's readers feel that way about Hogwarts.

Since so many fans take the books so personally and will likely be furious at Rowling for bringing their dreams up short, even the most magical ending is in for a mixed reception. And I don't expect her to come up with a great ending. For one thing, endings are hard; almost nobody gets them right. (I remember how mad I was at Lewis after I read the bland and unconvincing seventh Narnia book, The Last Battle.) Rowling's strengths—wit, atmosphere, endless delightful detail—are better suited to the earlier parts of a story arc. She's wonderful at manipulating complicated plots without letting the threads snarl; I'm always impressed to find what looked like a minor character or throwaway detail re-emerging thousands of pages later as vital part of the plot (Moaning Myrtle; Scabbers). But she has set us up to expect a conclusion with profound moral implications, and she doesn't do deep nearly as well. Other fantasists—J.R.R. Tolkien, Ursula K. Le Guin, Philip Pullman, George MacDonald, Susanna Clarke, to name a few of my favorites, and it sounds like you would add Alexander to that list—reach through our world to something symbolic and universal, often borrowing strength from myth and religion. Rowling does a wonderful job exploring moods like anxiety and euphoria; I loved the Dementors as an embodiment of depression. But her moral vision seems to me less nuanced. Her battles between good and evil strike me as plot-driven and mechanical. Do you agree?

Take Harry himself. You refer to "The progressive darkening of the Harry Potter books, and Harry's quest for knowledge both of himself and of his world" and ask whether I expect "A tragic tale of Christlike martyrdom." Definitely not. If we do get a martyrdom—even Harry's—it won't be Christlike. In that ability-to-love passage you refer to, Dumbledore tells Harry, "[Y]ou have never been seduced by the Dark Arts, never, even for a second, shown the slightest desire to become one of Voldemort's followers! … In spite of all the temptation you have endured, all the suffering, you remain pure of heart, just as pure as you were at the age of eleven, when you stared into a mirror that reflected your heart's desire, and it showed you only the way to thwart Lord Voldemort, and not immortality or riches."

Does that sound like a progression toward self-knowledge to you? Not to me. No growth for Harry; unlike Jesus, who spent 40 days flirting with Satan, the permanent innocent has never even been tempted by power. What drives Harry is "love," but not the all-forgiving love of Christianity; in fact, it's hard to distinguish the love in question from revenge. On the next page, "Harry watched Dumbledore striding up and down in front of him and thought. … He thought of all the terrible deeds he knew Lord Voldemort had done. A flame seemed to leap inside his chest, searing his throat. 'I'd want him finished,' said Harry quietly. 'And I'd want to do it.'" That's as far from Jesus telling his disciples that those without sin on their own consciences should throw the first stone as it is from the famous passage in The Lord of the Rings when Frodo, the Harrylike hobbit hero, complains to Gandalf, the Dumbledore figure, that his cousin should have killed the traitor Gollum when he had a chance. It was a pity he didn't, Frodo says. Gandalf disagrees: "Pity? It was Pity that stayed his hand. Pity, and Mercy: not to strike without need." And Pity pays off. Through his greed and by his death, Gollum saves the world. Now, that was a satisfying ending.

So, how will The Deathly Hallows end? Here are my guesses: Voldemort will be vanquished; Rowling is far too good a sport to throw the game to Evil. Harry may take brave risks for the people he loves, but the conclusion won't involve him, or anyone else, turning the other cheek. And he won't die, either. The one who will make the supreme sacrifice to save the world is Snape. Of course Snape is good! Dumbledore trusted him to the end, didn't he? Snape will play a key role in helping Harry kill Voldemort and lose his life as a result.

That's two dead characters—Voldemort and Snape—but maybe Voldemort doesn't count. If not, who do you think corpse No. 2 (or, for that matter, No. 1) will be?

The quickest way to find out, of course, is to peek. PDFs of what people say looks like the real thing are available on file-sharing services, complete with pictures of the leaker's knuckles. I'm staying away from the file, myself—I thought I saw the Dark Mark on the guy's forearm, and who knows where the document keeps its brain?

Best,
Polly

Rowling Is Bound To Disappoint Us

Updated Thursday, July 19, 2007, at 2:09 PM ET
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Dan Kois was the founding editor of New York magazine's arts and culture blog, Vulture. He lives in Arlington, Va. Will Leitch is the editor of Deadspin.com and the author of the young adult novel Catch. Brad Meltzer, a novelist and comics writer, is the author of The Book of Fate. Polly Shulman is the author of Enthusiasm, a novel for young adults.
Illustration by Charlie Powell.
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I find it odd that people seem disappointed that 19 years down the road the characters lead seemingly humdrum lives, about which we don't hear much. [That's] just the point.

Folks, most people don't aspire to be under constant threat of death - mostly people want to live happy, relatively uneventful lives. They want to live in a house they love, do work they enjoy, raise kids, be comfortable. The fact that killing Voldemort allowed this to happen is, I think, poignant - Harry was never comfortable as the Boy Who Lived, and now he can finally get away from it. Maybe as readers we want excitement and adventure and really wild things on the page, but by not making Harry et al want these things, Rowling is respecting the characters she created.

On a certain level, I find it a profound commentary on what most people want out of life - not fame or fortune or power, but love and happiness. Odd that so many readers don't seem to see that.

--brennan

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The continued short shrift that Harry gives Hermione is incredibly frustrating in this book, more than in any other. Perhaps Rowling's one effort to comment on this is when she complains about having to do all the cooking - which is not only immediately dismissed, but also like, come on! The one thing Hermione is going to complain about is something so easily dismissed by the unsympathetic reader as an 'age old' feminist complaint. How about the fact that Hermione does everything and never gets a shred of the credit, other than some astonished expressions and the occasional "Mione that's amazing!"

She is consistently the character who saves Harry's ass and I continue to be frustrated that in the last book Rowling does nothing to really acknowledge or challenge this within her book - it is not just enough to assume that readers who like Hermione are going to get it, especially when Harry remains on such a pedestal, or that the lack of thoroughgoing challenge to Harry and Ron's behavior will be picked up on by readers with feminist sympathies, especially when most readers do not share such sympathies! It is especially important to be challenging this, I think, in a children's book.

It is not really believable that Hermione wouldn't challenge Harry more when she so relentlessly stands up for those who are denied rights, equality, and dignity. Maybe it's that other tendency on her part (or Rowling's?) to view her guy(s) as the only ones who are not sexist - they're my best friends, how can they be sexist? etc

Does Rowling's overall failure to inject a feminist critique into Harry Potter reflect her desire to prevent the boys from having to engage in some serious self-critique, a caving in to popular dislike of feminism, or her own discomfort with feminism?

--heypop

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The Problem with the final Harry Potter book is lack of sex. In books 5-6 the students at Hogwarts slowly start to come to terms with their maturing attitudes to the opposite sex. Rowling deftly negotiates the concerns and fears of adolescence as they begin to date, and finally "snog". Throughout book 6 Rowling has various students, including Ron, Harry, and Ginny snogging constantly as they realize their emerging desires.

In book 7 Rowling starts with a great scene showing Harry's awkward attitude towards himself, his body, and his friends. "He felt like asking them to show a little more respect for his privacy as they all began stripping off with impunity, clearly much more at ease with his body then they would have been with their own." This one line gives much insight into the mindset of a 17 year old and allows Harry and his friends to seem believable.

When you contrast that with the 3 teens spending months living together in a forest, with no one supervising, and no one else to disturb them and yet there's no real awkwardness or tension ever described, you begin wonder why Rowling took her characters and replaced them with figurines. By the time Rowling has the plot moving she's turned each of them into an extreme example of their singular character traits. Never is it more apparent then when each wishes for their favorite Deathly Hallow.

Had she bothered making her characters continuously feel real, she could have actually written an interesting finale to the book...rather than a plot-driven bore upheld by at least half a dozen deux ex machina moments.

--Joschenker

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