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  • a moment

    you've captured perfectly.
    Posted to Poems by catnapping on November 27, 2007

  • if he was up here in mizzoo

    his bloom would surely be covered in ice! i like this so very much, sandy.
    Posted to Poems by catnapping on November 23, 2007

  • dear sockpuppet,

    me thinks you need help translating your japanese. or perhaps you are relying on someone who is as clueless as you. ''do not forget?'' tsk tsk. did you find the verb, する, in this haiku?
    Posted to Poems by catnapping on November 23, 2007

  • Re: Zen Garden

    i really like your haiku, sogal. each of us thinks in a different order...i see that everyone here has his/her own ideas of how they might have written YOUR haiku. hehehehe even me. i would have written stilling the mind,simple lines drawn in the sand i see that your 3W this week is a big hit. proof that (for the talented) there is life beyond ...
    Posted to Poems by catnapping on November 15, 2007

  • fibonacci-ispired poems were fun, too.

    i can't remember who exactly brought them up at the p-fray. (i'm thinking it was MA), but i got a real kick out of playing with them. i remember reading some that felt haiku, some senyru...and some were offered in full grammatical sentences. each line's number of syllables equalled: 1, 1,2,3,5, and8.
    Posted to Poems by catnapping on November 10, 2007

  • oy. sorry for the typo.

    thanks sg. it's your haiku that i like best. i find myself wishing you'd top post your work, rather than bury it in subthreads. but i think i might understand. your responses are spontaneous...and besides, any feedback you'd want for your work, you're probably already getting from your community....haiku poets, like yourself, in the ...
    Posted to Poems by catnapping on November 9, 2007

  • i really like this, sogal.

    an image conveyed with as few words as possible...very haiku. thumbs up.
    Posted to Poems by catnapping on September 24, 2007

  • Edison Jennings to the Rabbit (and now to you)

    Fellow Fraysters, Edison Jennings tried to send me some comments by e-mail after receiving and reading a collation I made of the parodies some of us came up with (as inspired by ''Apple Economics''). Unfortunately (as I told him when he asked) the comments never arrived in my mailbox. This is what he sent next: Ahh, Mr. Rabbit--It's a shame ...
    Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on August 19, 2007

  • Rewriting the OPP, "Hot" by Craig Arnold, as a Haiku

    Seems to me that even a limerick is too long and the flavor of this poem can be boiled down further still. HOT! foods on a dare?Friendship and tastebuds, both burnedA glass of milk, please.
    Posted to Poems by NoStar on August 9, 2007

  • that works so much better

    that i'm going to change it on my senryu blog. thank you, maryann.
    Posted to Poems by catnapping on August 8, 2007
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