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Novenber, two poems
by Bratsche

I

good thing (November-
wise) that the body is
- nearly automomous
slept, fed and the collective in-
terum Newtonian enough
to over-ride mind's drear of summer gone

good too
that addiction's pantry can
(as mind laments
window's beyond of drizzle and chill)
still andante as trim/ballast
that of coffee and cigarette,
legs porch-wise the whole self's chance
to glimpse some errant robin
wedging dark Aprillic sounds
from an oak still clutching fists of wither

not so good
is the full-fetal absence of April next
robin and green oak bragging a mixed duet -
rut-sounds accenting the polyrhythmics of wind in leaf

these empty the heart a bit,
prompt the thin anguish of a voiceless sigh

nor so good
that night by grace-note elisions
will empty to forrest-deep
the lingers of red and robin bird
instead them with jay-stabs,
the sullen clash of crow sounds,
or the clammorous rorschach of starlings
crashing from air to ground and back again

- heart rues the exchange

how rending it is
to case the hibernati of summer things
a graveless intuitas
beyond which the heart may
or may not live to strum again


II

dusk
cloudless silver-peach
chill whispering into coldness

gyre of gnats
oddly jubilant
strumming but an image
in the gathered stillness

in so few moments
they forge an absence

become they stars,
or huddle in the fixed wing of house eave?

stars are so distant

spiders
have a closeness

one that

thickens dark the more

Re: Novenber, two poems
by islandtime
Hi, B, November poem ii is exquisite. Not a single coined word or unexpected usage (which I would say you could claim as a trademark), but I think the pared down, simple approach is what makes the poem so effective.
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